Fiction Friday ~ Present

Jul 12, 2013

Present…

…stay here and run the ranch with Will, but that had never really been her dream. She longed to do something that would change the world. Change someone’s present circumstances more than giving them well feed beef.

As Sarah pulled into the bank and gazed up at its window reflecting back the building next to it, she sighed. This job made her sick. Here she was trying to sell credit to people who had no business taking it. Here she was hurting more people in the long run than she was helping them.

“I want to help people!” she thought.

Sarah walked across the polished floor to knock on her manager’s door. “Come in,” said the chipper voice.

“Can I talk to you…

Fiction Friday is for me to have fun and get back in the habit of writing fiction. I hope you enjoy it! To check out the previous installments of this story click here. The first one is at the bottom.

I’m using the Gypsy Mama’s Friday prompts to get me started. Every Friday writers join together at LisaJoBaker.com for Five Minute Friday. One word, five minutes, no editing, and no back tracking. Come join the fun!

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5 Comments

  1. Denise

    Good writing.

  2. Jenn

    You have a fabulous imagination and creative way of using Five Minute Fridays – love, love, love

  3. pioneercynthia

    Again, love this. Do you ever take these entries and make them into something larger?

  4. Letting the Words Escape

    Love this! I’ve been trying to get back into writing my 3rd fiction, and this is such a good idea! Thank you for the comments and visiting my blog!

  5. T. L. Cole

    Thank you, ladies!
    Pioneercynthia, because of a comment on my first one several months ago, I’m kinda making them a straight story line. Sort of a very rough first draft. I’m really enjoying it because doing it this way is taking a lot of pressure off : )
    Words Escape, please use the idea! It’s really helping me to get back to writing fiction and because of it, I’m on the 3rd draft of a children’s book, too.

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